If it was a wee bit darker or perhaps the edges shadowed, it would look better. That shade of red is just disturbing to the eye. Besides that, those are ALOT of words. The coloring is ok, but the clash with the background needs just a little adjusting. Poor Mister Lenon though, he must have either gone mad when he wrote that, or perhaps he wasn't living on earth at the time. I doubt that The earth will ever "live as one", although it is a lofty goal for a life.